Admittedly, I cringed when I saw ‘nemore’. Acceptable in the context of this story, but when I see it in real texts I get the urge to slice off fingers.
But yes, your brevity is to be commended. This may be our shortest complete story so far. It is quite hard to write something with so little words. Well done.
I like this – brevity is great, especially compared to the previous dense, overworked entry.
Is it 100% fiction, or something closer to home?
Admittedly, I cringed when I saw ‘nemore’. Acceptable in the context of this story, but when I see it in real texts I get the urge to slice off fingers.
But yes, your brevity is to be commended. This may be our shortest complete story so far. It is quite hard to write something with so little words. Well done.
- Christine
Wow, I really quite like this entry. It made me quite sad actually.
I think it’s my favourite of April’s entries. I always like cleverly crafted succinct pieces.
- Jay